This second assignment on the OCA’s Art of Photography course is concerned with elements of design. Michael Freeman in The Photographer’s Eye (Ilex, 2007), a core text on the course emphasises the role that points, lines and shape play in an image. He compares (p65) the role of graphic design in classic design theory as it applies to painting and illustration with photography. In doing so he notes that while in the former it is not difficult to isolate these marks and forms from real subjects in photography the elements often depend on we choose to consider an image. Freeman notes that points are the simplest elements of design that tend to draw attention. Lines are valuable in directing and creating vectors whole shapes have the role of organising the elements of an image and bringing structure.
The project briefing notes require that a set of photographs directed towards one type of subject are assembled that incorporate the insights gained in the exercises on the elements of design.
I have chosen details gathered from Dublin’s Docklands area for the images. In particular, I have selected a small area around the river Liffey that incorporates very new developments such as the Daniel Liebskind designed Bord Gais Energy Theatre in the Grand Canal/Hanover Quay area through to the very old Ringsend village area. The choice of this urban/docklands area was deliberate insofar as this type of imagery is not a feature of my image making and I wished to stretch my perspectives in this regard. The area has a mixture of very new apartment blocks and offices, cafe areas, harbour and canal basins and older buildings, some still used and some boarded up.
Eleven photographs that use a variety of design elements are included in the exercise and each of these, where I felt necessary, is preceded by a short commentary.
Single Point Dominating the Composition
Two Points Dominating the Composition
The image is of Ringsend Church at night. The highlights of the clocks have been deliberately blown to a) emphasise the two single points in the image b) allow some of the detail of the church itself to be captured and c) to create the sinister effect that I had pre-visualised.
Several Points in a Deliberate Shape
A Combination of Vertical and Horizontal Lines
Diagonals
In both this image and the following one, dominated by the curve, I was taken with the combination of the old, in the form of the industrial chimneys, and the new of the modern office blocks. I have, in both images, tried to use the chimneys to ‘anchor’ the dynamism of the diagonals and the curves, See also the exercise on triangles in which one of the chimneys has been used to create a triangle through perspective.
Curves
Distinct, Even if Irregular, Shapes
Two Kinds of Implied Triangle
Rhythm
In order to capture the detail in the building the highlights have been deliberately blown. The plaque at the bottom right hand corner notes the date of the original building on the site and offers a break from the rhythm.
Pattern
Assessment Criteria and Reflection
At Level 4 of the OCA programmes the emphasis is on the acquisition of skills and good working habits including the keeping of learning logs . Additionally, Level 4 students should be informing themselves about others’ work by reading and viewing exhibitions. The learning logs associated with this assignment, which is itself being submitted as a blog, are all found at ‘adivinglifeblog.wordpress.com’. There are four types of blog; exercises associated with projects, reflections, book reviews and exhibition reviews. In general terms, therefore, the requirements of the programme are being met. The specific assessment criteria for Level 4 programmes, together with my reflection of how this assignment measures against them, are given below.
The Demonstration of Technical and Visual Skills – materials, techniques,observational skills, visual awareness, design and compositional skills.
The images captured for these exercises have involved a range of locations, lighting conditions and subjects that, in turn, have required the use of the full range of camera settings and techniques including slow and fast shutter speeds, narrow and wide apertures, changes in ISO and the use of a tripod. Additionally, post image processing has involved conversion from RAW, cropping, perspective correction and levels adjustments. The work to date therefore has demonstrated a wide range of technical skills.
In contrast to Assignment One, where I struggled to reflect on the visual skills component of the learning outcomes required, in this assignment, and the underpinning exercises, I am much more confident about demonstration of visual skills in this assignment. For this asssignment and underpinning exercises I deliberately chose to make images that I would not normally make. In this instance, deatils of a docklands area. In doing so I have surprised myself with how engaged I became with the process. In order to complete the assignment I visited the central location (Grand Canal/Hanover Quay) on four separate occasions to make, repeat and refine the images I was collecting. Each time I went I saw new images and new ways of using the design elements to structure the images.
The Quality of Outcome; content, application of knowledge, presentation of work in a coherent manner, discernment, conceptualisation of thoughts, communication of ideas.
Each of the exercises has addressed the particular task and frequently contained reflections within the exercise as well as post exercise reflections to ensure that learning was embedded. The work has been structured appropriately and narrated to ensure that lines of thought within the work are clear.
The Demonstration of Creativity; imagination, invention, development of a personal voice.
For this assignment and the underpinning exercises, I deliberately chose to make images that would not be abundant in my portfolio. As I have noted above, urban/dockland details would not normally feature in my image making. Although images of individual buildings or details of buildings occur in my work, the exercises and assignment have shown clearly to me that my composition of these images needs to be improved; something worked upon for these exercises and this assignment.
As will be noted below, visits to galleries outside of Ireland and the feedback from Assignment One has enabled me to start to start to think about why rather than how I am making images – the first step towards identifying my personal voice. A good example of this is the image of Ringsend Church at night towards the beginning of this assignment. My thinking here was very simple. I wanted to meet the requirement to use two points in the design and create an image that was sinister or ominous in intent.
A separate reflection on the exercises underpinning this assignment has been undertaken and is here.
Context; reflection, research, critical thinking (learning log).
Because I have a research background I am used to the need for reflection and critical thinking and am happy that the blogs in which the exercises, book reviews, exhibition reviews and reflections are covered are providing me with the appropriate learning opportunities. In a reflection on the previous assignment I noted that a general lack of exhibitions in Ireland would be addressed by occasional visits outside of Ireland. A recent trip afforded the opportunity to visit FOAM and the HUIS Marseille in Amsterdam. A blog on my visit to the FOAM gallery is here and a blog on the HUIS gallery will follow in coming weeks.